I need your support guys, I want you to give critics on the topics I wrote. ?

Question

Here are the following websites of the topics. Thank you... It is for the improvement of my skills in writing.

Topics

1. Battlefied of the Mind: Winning The Battle In Your Mind - Reflection

http://www.authspot.com/Journals/Battlefield-of-the-Mind-Winning-the-Battle-in-Your-Mind.214505

2. Survivor's Practical Guide of Breaking Chains of Abuse -

http://www.bookstove.com/Non-fiction/Survivors-Practical-Guide-for-Breaking-Chains-of-Abuse.214503

3. Healing For Damaged Emotions - A Book Review

http://www.bookstove.com/Non-fiction/Survivors-Practical-Guide-for-Breaking-Chains-of-Abuse.214503

Answer 1

Hi Kathy,

I really focused on the thoughts more than on the grammar, etc.  If you want me to look again for the grammar and usage, let me know.  But I enjoyed reading them so much.

I was thinking of you this morning and saying, "Hmmm.... I wonder how Kathy is getting along."  Then when I checked my mail, there was your note!  Isn't that wild?  

I sent you an email inviting you to one of my favorite sites.  I think your book reviews would also be appreciated there.

Love,

Fairelight