I put this in wrong section is it any good in the right section

Question

I need more than a friend

I need more than a helping hand

I need more than comforting words

To help me understand

I need to know that I`m wanted

I need to know someone cares

I need to know what happened

And why I`m sat here in tears

I need to know it was n`t my fault

I need to know there`s no shame

I need to know that in the end

There`s someone else to blame

Answer 1

I think this would work better as a song

Answer 2

Generally,your poem is decent,in light of a lack of descriptive phrases.There a mistake which I can point out-'I`m wanted'can be amended to 'I want'.And the end ends abruptly,I must confess.You had try your best,decent job,be sure to add more vocabulary in your next poem.

Answer 3

i like this poem and can relate it to me, i myself have written many like it. it makes perfect sense to someone who knows ........... keep it up!