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The table chart above reflects information about the main resons of studying and the amount of support students received from their employees in terms of diffrent age groups .

According to the data in the first graph,there are two main reasons to prompt study:for carrer and for interst respectively. we can clearly see that the reason fo r carrer undergone an feling trend along with the age growing,ranging from 80% for students under 26 to fewer than 20% for them over 49.By contrast, the other reason represent a reverse trend,for students under 26 there were only 10%of them take interest first,then the peoportion began to rise untill 70% was recorded for students over 49.

Let's look at the other chart,It can be clearly seen that along with the age increasing,the percentage of the employer's support began to drop ,hitting its loweest point for the 30-39 group,,before returning to roughly 40 for the people over the age of 49

In summary,the students' main resaon for study shift from for career to for interest gradually along with the mounting age.besides,the employers' suppport registerd a relatively high proportion for the stundents under 29.

Answer 1

Paragraph 1:   ...main reAsons FOR studying...diffErent age groups

Paragraph 2:  ...prompt study: for carEER and for intEREst...   We can... The next sentence makes no sense.  You wrote:  we can clearly see that the reason fo r carrer undergone an feling trend along with the age growing...       I have no idea what you're trying to say.

By contrast, the other reason representS a reverse trend.  For students under 26 there were only 10% of them WHO TOOK  interest first, then the pRoportion began to rise until (only one l in until)  70% was recorded for students over 49.

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Let's look at the other chart.  It can be clearly seen that along with the age INCREASE, the percentage of the employer's support ...

Last paragraph:  

In summary, the students' main REASON for study shiftS gradually  (use 'gradually'  here instead of after 'interest.') from (leave out 'for')  career to interest along with the mounting age.  IN ADDITION ,the employers' support registerEd a relatively high proportion for the stUDents under 29.

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