I revamped me poem, check it out and comment please.?

Question

Should I leave this all behind?

All that we have made,

Or should I stay just for a while?

Repair what has been broken.

If I stay,

Will I gain, or lose it all.

If I go,

Will I recover, or only get worse.

It’s true, I love you,

But still, I see all you have destroyed,

My friends, they hate you,

They don’t see the happiness you bring.

It’s hard to choose one’s destiny,

This simple choice, not simply made,

If I go I will miss you,

But if I stay, will I regret it?

<3

~an average girl

Answer 1

omg, i love it!

i&#039;d love to hear more of your poems :]

Answer 2

I like both of em.  Maybe somehow you could combine the two?