I rewrote part of the song, "almish paradise," and turned it into a poem! lol opinion anyone?

Question

As I walk through the valley where I harvest my corn, I take a look at my shirt, and realize it's very worn! But thats just perfect for a farmer like me, as day after day, I dig up dead trees.

At 4:30 in the mornin I'm milkin cows, while Joseph feeds the chickens and Jacob plows! But that's just perfect for a farmer like me, as day after day, I dig up dead trees.

Anyone Like It?? lol

Answer 1

cute it is ike farmers paradise

Answer 2

Well, you kind of overdid this.

You've made a parody on a parody on a parody.

'cause before "amish paradise - Wierd Al"

there was "gangsters' paradise - Coolio"

And before that there was "Pasttime paradise - Stevie wonder"

In that order:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GsfVw9xxo...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6voHeEa3...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=840uku8_T...