I think I have a hangover. Do you like this poem?

Question

Gold (???)

It's raining in the front yard

and sunny in the back.

Has Mother Nature lost her mind

and gone all out of whack?

A rainbow glows upon the fence

bolts of lightning crack.

Splits wide open does the rainbow

and coins of gold spill out

covering yards, both front and back

and all around my feet

says the voice inside my head

"It's time to retire to Mars."

Answer 1

No hangover, This happens in Florida everyday.  But never described like this.    Lovely.

Answer 2

Don't worry, you will be there soon. Funny and well-crafted poem. You get better every day.

Answer 3

as a friend of mine wrote:

Climb aboard my shuttle

and I'll take you to Mars

where words are not left empty

they're filled with chocolate bars.

Answer 4

One of nature's mystery and have been in the rain and kept walking to find the dry weather and walked back into the rain, Very strange thing also can see the almost invisible  line dividing the two. Loved your poem and it did express this very thing!!  Cheers !!

Answer 5

It really feels strange when this happens (yah - the hangover too) - I saw it once - my house was in rain - but the next block over was sun.  Like the cartoons that show a person with a raincloud over their head. Nay - I didn't take it personal. I had some roses that needed to be watered anyway - and it was not serious enough - to move off-planet - to Mars. ♥

Answer 6

Reenie, have I told you lately that I love you? (pinched some-one else's line, but what the heck)

This is great....don't go, don't go!  (Unless I can come too)

Answer 7

Have another shot. Better yet, I'll join you.

Answer 8

Good description, delighting and well concluded. Rainbows are my favourites.

Whenever it appears,

I shall be out there till it disappears!

  

and yea, "it's time to be on Mars". Great Times!

Answer 9

nice fantasy

Answer 10

Mars-vellous Poem Dahling! (hic!) I love youse all! (hic!) Now where's that delete key (hic!)

Sun is over the yard arm - time for a glass of red wine....did you start without me Reenie? Or did you end up finding the Beer Stand at the Baseball. Hey, where's mine? lol

Answer 11

Yea, I like it... Very Good...

Answer 12

The golden pot is there for thee,

Right where the rainbow sprouts.

It's filled with gold and precious things,

It makes you want to shout.

But cursed it is, this pot of gold,

It's brilliance you now see.

The first time that you blink your eyes,

Then gone that gold will be.