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Question

Rock Solid

A trapped dead soul glitters;

a diamond, sealed carbon

memory.

Hard, mute and motionless,

never again

swollen and pulsing with seething sap.

The tree, the leaf, the organic body fused.

I might weep for the mountain,

the rock, the diamond, for the idea of them

but, no, my mind and the mountain sustain each other.

My mind climbs the mountain,

stands on its summit reading the words

inscribed there by wind and rain and time.

We are one.

your flesh..

I will make of you a diamond.

Look inside

and find enlightenment,

a solid solace.

~ patsy mcAuley

Answer 1

First, I am getting more impressed with your writing as you post, so my compliments to you.  The imagery in this seems to be related to what I discern as the dealing with the lost of one and finding solace, enlightment and meaning with that in the context of your journey in life and knowledge gained.  This is one that rereading brings more thoughts.  My compliments.