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I want to share this beautiful poem with you (I did not write it)?

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I didn't write this. It's from "Adventures in Odyssey" Produced by focus on the family. [It's a radio drama]

i love it. what do you think?

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"I was trapped...

By the invisible lines of my fate.

Tricked by the idea that I could not escape.

Chained up in a ghetto where my father died!

Fooled into thinking I would never go outside.

Imprisoned by my friends who knew nothing but war,

Shakled to everything that had gone on before

I would always be here, in this dead end life of mine,

My heart turned back by a city-limit sign!

And yet...

And yet I now see a way out of my concrete jail.

A new way to soften a heart that's gone stail.

No longer cursin' this place for the wealth

No longer fightin' with man or myself

I understand now what it takes to get real

If you wanna stand up, you have to learn how to kneel

I surrender, my weapons are down at my feet,

'Cause we'll never have freedom, when there's blood on the street.

Thank you."

© Focus on the Family

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  1. wow i love it...amazingg.

    how about mineeee?

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  2. Well it's ok, entertaining and nice, but basic at best.

  3. wow

  4. I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

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