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I want to write a poem but dont no how to put it together

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i have come up with things i would like in it;

Im flying high on a cloud of romance,

Im glad you gave us a second chance,

Love isnt about finding a perfect person,

You recognise their flaws and imperfectons and you accept them for who they are,

You have my unconditional love,

Cupid must have sent down an arrow from above

can anyone help make something out of this?? thank you

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  1. By asking others to finish your poem for you, you are compromising its artistic integrity. A poem or any work of art is supposed to reflect the individual outlook of the artist and there is no right or wrong way to do it. It is your art from your part of view from your soul and when you feel that it is done to your satisfaction, regardless of what anyone else says about whether it is "Right" or "Wrong", then it is done correctly. If you do not feel it is right or complete, then work on it some more until YOU are satisfied with it.


  2. poetry can follow various rules, but ultimately it is up to you. You dont have to rhyme, you can have odd "meter", so its really up to you.  

  3. i think it sounds fine like that.

    it doesnt need to be in iambic pentameter.

    poetry can be any words put in any order.

    good luck with it!

  4. Every moment is a memory for the heart,

    A thing that keeps us from being apart.

    Each kiss brings me closer to you,

    Each hug keeps me from being blue.

    I give this as my devotion to you

    I will love you from here on

  5. Im flying high on a cloud of romance,

    Soaring high up above,

    Im glad you gave us a second chance,

    Now I know what its like to be in love

    Love isnt about finding a perfect person,

    its much more by far,

    in time youll be learning,

    You recognise flaws and imperfectons and  accept them for who they are,

    You have my unconditional love,

    youve had it from the start,,

    Cupid must have sent down an arrow from above,

    because youve captured my heart,

    idk..i could do more if i had the time..i dont even know if i did a good job..i tried though

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