I was the fool....be gentle its just a poem?

Question

started off cool that newschool colabo

cause our oldschool senior year groove proved she could hurt me to my soul

forgive and forget thats wat jesus say

deciding to rewind time emtying the mind of mines of all bad lyrics and scifer fought

Tic Tock

Yeah thats our clock

When you hear ticked mine would toc

Our biological clocks, but mines was a bit slower

You left me stranded in the past, gutter water soakin my ***, but for me to forgive you all you had to do was ask.

Mama said stand in love dont fall in it, too late caught in a free fall , with dreams of white pickett fences and a lab named spot

**** that !

An apartment in New York and a Pitbull, yeah now das hip hop

Time came to make moves and you started acting funny

Answer 1

i don't know what to say. this is hardly a poem. i want to be gentle, but i want to say that my dogs come up with better stuff when they walk across the keyboard.

Answer 2

^ harsh lol...."Mama said stand in love dont fall in it, too late caught in a free fall , with dreams of white pickett fences and a lab named spot" I like that..

Answer 3

You are no fool,

At least you tried,

just lost your way a little.

Your words I read and understood

but for poetry you ain't ready!

just a little joke you understand! Actually I can see meaning in your verse. Interesting,but needs some changes in order to make more sense.