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I wonder if she knows..?

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A day without you…

Leaves a hole in me

Tears my soul from me

Takes its toll on me

Sets a goal with me

Makes clear the role for me

A night in your arms…

Now it reminds me

How it defines me

Sometimes it blinds me

Love it confines me

Again it aligns me

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  1. lucky lady...


  2. AWESOME! I love it!!!

  3. How could she not know?!

  4. Tear your soul from you

    I Do Not,

    Remind,Define,Love, I Do!

    [ oops, sorry] Another one For The Heart!

    You Write So Many Dreamy Words,I Wonder,

    Sir,are you Truly So Romantic?

  5. Loved it all , you are very versatile, been reading your poems for a little while!  The stuff just seems to flow out of you!!!

    Cheers!!!

  6. wow! I hope she does, Great work again Treb

  7. awsome

  8. How bout checking L6 - the meter seems to be a little off. Suggestion - eliminate "Makes" and say "Clears the role for me" instead? ♥

  9. awww that was sweet!!

  10. Love your work

  11. Superb! I do hope she knows.... I especially love the last stanza.

  12. Dear poet,

      Might I suggest "Void" in place of "Hole" and "Always" in place of "How".

    Are love, few can explain it but many feel the affects of it.

    Well penned.

    Robert

  13. I like the day and night differences in the poem. Oddly it reminds me of a chef that takes one main ingredient and prepares it two ways on the dish-The same idea yet uniquely different if that makes sense
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