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I would like opinions on this song I wrote

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It's copyright!

anyways, it's called "You Should Appreciate"

Running through my head are things I don't really know. Thoughts unclear making every minute show. Help me out so I'm not stuck anymore. A favor to ask, just a friendly score.

Oh, this world is something we should appreciate. 'Cause life is what you make it, you initiate. No one's fault if you break it, you should appreciate.

We move through existance in the end we die alone. Maybe our soul seeks further rather than setting in stone. Maybe we have to wait until the end to know. But what we find in the end could help us grow.

Oh, this world is something we should appreciate. 'Cause life is what you make it, you initiate. No one's fault if you break it, you should appreciate.

Too many people take their lives' for granted. Thinking they're too good to live on our planet. Too many people think they're all we need. Thinking they're so good so we should hail to them as we plead.

Oh, this world is something we should appreciate. 'Cause life is what you make it, you initiate. No one's fault if you break it, you should appreciate.

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  1. your songs are really interesting. and they arent about what everyone else writes about, i like that. Great work :)


  2. what is this, soft core hip hop?

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