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I would like to know what people think of my poem?

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I knew this girl once, her story made me cry.

She told me of the lonely feelings she'd felt deep inside.

Everyone she'd ever trusted had either betrayed her, or left her side.

She told me of the things her father used to do,

And how her mother only denied the abuse.

And even with him gone there was little relief.

Words were said by her mother, only from anger, but they still don't leave her memory.

She told me how she couldn't stand her mothers lies,

Or how she always would take her fathers side.

She left and stayed with family, but the lonely feeling still burnt intensively.

She told me how she'd met this man, and she knew he was too old.

But the words he spoke so soft to her, just felt so good.

She longed to feel loved and be held in someones arms,

And this man had just enough charm.

But he held her to tight, and she started to fear,

That what he wanted was much more then had appeared.

He made her do things that she'd never done before.

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  1. woww

    that's really deep

    i like it

    your a good poet


  2. Just a short story with line breaks.

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