I wrote a poem called mindlessly thinking (its ment to be ironic)? im 16 btw?

Question

mindlessly thinking

i close my eyes and

hope for the destruction of my mind.

my thought keeps me thinking

even as im sleeping...mindlessly thinking

never ending mindless thinking

my eyes kept wide open and

somewhat dry. held inside my head,

in a dream without resting.

death and murder,

love and hate,

corruption and politics,

time and space,

knowledge and ignorance,

religion and rhyme,

morals and science,

the list goes on and on till the end off my time.

though i wish their destruction

i couldnt go on without their production,

so i continue mindlessly thinking,

back to the beginning,

mindlessly thinking.

Answer 1

better then the other one but again take it apart  write and rewrite  i dont understand the list  what production do it over and think about each line this time

Answer 2

Have you ever encountered the 'Zen' doctrine of  'No Mind' ?

The idea is similar.

Answer 3

i feel this way sometimes, i sit forever thinking & thinking so much so that i have to force myself to some sort of mindless entertainment.-blurey

Answer 4

my honest opinion: boring and dull

Answer 5

You did not ask a question. You made a statement and attached a poem. What would you like to know?