I wrote a somewhat controversial poem, but I'd like to know what others think?

Question

I think you can understand what it's about. I hold strong beliefs in this area, so I think I could handle the emotions well in it.

(Title up to suggestion)

Today is my birthday mommy!

I am 4 months old.

I call myself Sophie and my hair is gold

I have green eyes, and little toes

Tiny ears and a small button nose

I’m growing fast and my hearts beating loud

Oh, mommy you’re going to be so proud

I want to travel with you, to New York and to the shore

I can’t wait until I’m yours to adore

So mom, where are we going today?

Wait, the doctor? That’s not until Tuesday

Mommy, who’s he? I don’t know him!

No, not this! Did he say limb by limb?

I love you mommy, I love you!

Are you mad, what did I do?

I’m so sorry, mommy, please forgive me

I’ll make it up to you, you’ll see

Just not this, I want to live!

You won’t believe the love I have to give

I love you more than you can know

Please, mommy, please, don’t make me go

I feel it now, the doctor’s here

And if I could cry, you’d see my tears

I don’t know why you hate me, mommy, but it’s okay

Because I want you to be happy, even if that means I can’t stay

So don’t worry about me, I’ll get through this

Even though I know that I won’t be missed

I’m losing life, and going to god in the sky

So I guess, mommy, this is goodbye.

Answer 1

i'm on the other side of the fence from you, but it's well written.

how 'bout  The Lost Good Bye.

Answer 2

Title it and put it on a more exposed forum... more people should read this.  Nice job.

Answer 3

wow, that was really touching.

it was seriously one of the best written poems ive read

how old are you? cause you got madd talent at writing

this is simple amazing :)