I wrote poem. Have a look.

Question

I used to write a lot.

How's this. I just wrote it now.

The fire, the good fire

The good orange warm fire

liberator of the sun's rays

communicating a star to me

oblivious

you would do it even if i weren't here

zen-like

you would pour your heat and light out into the cold universe

until there was silence

again

Just like me.

Just like me.

Answer 1

That is a very good poem you should have kepted it going and making it kind of long but that was pretty good, but make a part 2 of it and keep it going some time good luck.

Answer 2

Whoa! You have the talent for writing poetry. That's nice. ü

Answer 3

gooooood

Answer 4

wowo ur good.  really different and honest. a good poem!. very unique

Answer 5

good. Carry on

Answer 6

it's nice.. are you dedicating it to someone?