I wrote some songs-opinions and ideas?

Question

I wrote 2 songs recently. I don't think they're great, but I have had a few people tell me they're really good, so I wanted more opinions.

Whirlwind: http://chatterworld.freeforums.org/whirlwind-t750.html

Prayers: http://chatterworld.freeforums.org/prayers-t761.html

I am also stuck for ideas on what to write about for the next one-any suggestions?

Answer 1

these really are very good.  the only thing i notice is in prayers.  you seem to jump around a bit from idea to idea.  i would get some music to go with these songs.  no reason you couldn't market the lyrics :P