I wrote these poems. What do you think? ?

Question

Tears of Faith

She is gone.

Never shall I see her smile again.

It’s the way the world flows,

But it doesn’t seem right.

To think I shall never see her sparkling blue eyes again.

She is gone.

Without

Clocks ticking with no hands to hug.

Masterpieces painted with no artist to name.

A stairwell with no stairs.

A bar with no beers.

Without.

Answer 1

Kind of dreary.  Try writing about unicorns and rainbows.  

Answer 2

LOVE THEM BOTH!!!

sweet as dude!