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I wrote this, and I would like your comments.?

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Not a day goes by that I don't regret that day.

I knew it wasn't right but what was i to say?

No thank you, not now, maybe another day?

It didn't matter he'll do it anyway.

My mom warned me about this,

but we weren't gonna do it maybe just a kiss.

The night was over time to go home.

He didn't even say good bye, I felt so alone.

My mom woke up and asked where I've been.

Oh just out with Kate and her little sister Jenn.

A few months go by and my belly gets big.

No, I cant be pregnant I just eat like a pig.

I went to the store and got a test.

It didn't feel right, but lets hope for the best.

10 minutes go by and it's time to look.

This may be the hardest test I ever took.

I looked at the test and fell to the floor.

Next thing I heard was a knock at the door.

When I showed my mom she wasn't very proud.

When I showed my dad he screamed so loud.

There's nothing we can do the damage is done.

But there is options that won't be so fun.

We went to the doctors, they said its a boy.

So, how am i gonna tell his father Troy?

My mom told me we have to put him up for adoption.

My dad said This was my only option.

I chose a family who couldn't have kids of their own.

The parents names are David and Joan.

The labor was hard and it hurt quite a lot.

But it all went away when i got the shot.

The doctor came in and said "The family is here"

Its been a long road but the end is near.

Calebs new family came in I didn't know what to say.

They promised they would write everyday.

I wrote Caleb a letter,

telling him this was for the better.

The new happy family left the room and I started to cry.

I was so sad I wanted to die.

I was only 14 and made a big mistake,

and it's one I hope you never make.

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  1. wow, that is moving, i always believed if your young and cant take care of a child the best is adoption, or open adoption so you can see the child. but wow that was a moving poem


  2. This is an awesome poem is it true? Im so sorry.

  3. thank you now i will make sure i wait till i am ready

  4. wow that was awsome you can really write how you feel and you make it sound like the person who is reading it is really there with you.         i think that if this was about you that you made a good decision even though it was your parents decision. i believe that one day you will meet him and explain how you gave two people the blessing of a life time.  god bless you and your family you will have someday.

  5. Wow that was amazing... really moving like someone else already said. is this true?

  6. I was sad when I read your poems...  The last paragraph made the most powerful impact on my mind...

  7. I think it is a very good poem with a very good message and it makes you think twice about what you are going to do and how it can effect you in different ways.

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