I wrote this, i need oppinions.?

Question

this describes what im going through and i just finished writing it, i know its not perfect so pleasee, just positive critisism lol. (:

I remember it all,

as if it was yesterday

and now looking back

I have nothing left to say.

All the times we were together

I was so afraid

to lose you, and everything we had

and now it's all fading anyway.

'cuz you couldn't just wait one more day,

now I'm gone, I've gone away.

and do you know why?

why I cry these tears everynight?

knowing I wasn't enough for you,

so that you had to get more girls to use

but I also feel stupid for crying the tears I cry,

and for putting up with all your lies.

I lied to myself, when I knew what was goin' on.

and boy, I bet you think your so slick

making me pretend we were perfect together

but I think it's just really sick.

'cuz you couldn't just wait one more day

and now I'm gone, I've gone away

and do you know why?

why I cry these tears everynight?

knowing I wasn't enough for you

Answer 1

Hormonal malaise.

Answer 2

I can relate. Its pretty good, needs a little work, but I like it alot. Keep writing, it's good stuff.

<3

~an average girl