I wrote this awhile ago..is it any good??

Question

Throughout the black nights

Those dreams that kept coming back

Kept me waiting here

A flash of white

A strange misty figure

Standing in the distance

Beckoning with a steady hand

Bringing forth

A strange new feeling

My heart beating faster

Skipping with every single step

A pair of snow white wings

Outlined in the dark

Saving me from h**l

Bringing forth something so wonderful

Keeping me from falling

An angel above the clouds

Only in my dreams

Searching for a place

To stay close by

Waiting for me to realize

This won’t be what it’s like

After I’ve moved on

The silhouette vanishes

Leaving me standing

Alone amidst the fire

The torture and death

A new shadow appears

Dark and intimidating

Black wings overpower me

Sending me down

A path I don’t want to follow

Full of terror, darkness

The shadow of death

Looming in the distance

Waking in a cold sweat

Pulled back to reality

Vanishing through time

Thinking about this again

On nights to come

Living life through

Only time will tell

How that dream

Comes to an end

Taking a strange turn

Deciding which path to follow

Could be the toughest decision

Anyone could make

So many mistakes

So many problems in the world

Time to choose

Our own path

Early in our lives

As to not make those mistakes

To change the path we take

Turn the dream around

Answer 1

I think it has a sort of innocence about it.

Answer 2

I think that this is beautiful. The image you create is inspiring and although it is a bit gloomy, dark and sensual is exactly my style.