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I wrote this in ten seconds...soo umm rate it!!?

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A slip of a finger...

The stroke of a knife...

The instant that pends...

Between death and life.

The last cry of words...

The pause of a breath...

The silence that follows...

The final heart's rest.

The moment between...

When we were alive...

The second in which...

We must say good bye.

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  1. It's about a controversial subject, but you managed to make it great anyway! just one suggestion....

    switch "The final heart's rest" to The heart's final rest" other than that it is AMAZING!

    ~an average girl <3


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  3. Wow your really good!!

  4. you can think of good rymes

  5. luv it

  6. amazing amazing amazing.

    you did an awesome job.

    beautiful poem :D

  7. AWESOME!!!!

  8. Your rhyming is pretty good, but what are you trying to say?

  9. Heh, i like it.

    Ten seconds or not.
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