I wrote this myself. do you like my essay for my language class? please read and tell me your honest opinion!?

Question

What do you think of my essay? I am not done yet so it has a rather abrupt ending... just ignore the fact that it does not have a proper conclusion and tell me your thoughts on my essay! Thank you!

This is an essay that I am writing on a piece of paper for my language class. Well actually, I am not writing it on a piece of paper, I am typing it. Also it is not lined paper, it is printer paper. Although you can put lined paper in a printer and print stuff on it, like an essay. I am talking about the lined paper with three holes that you put in binders and things, not just any ordinary lined paper. I actually used college ruled paper in my printer once, except it did not really turn out so well since all the words did not stay on the lines like I wanted them to. So my teacher told me to write an essay on my first trip somewhere.

Answer 1

I like it alot.. great thoughts about the pronunciation and terms you used about the mothers accent. I actually laughed when reading it.. trying to imagine a mother and daughter conversation like you described.