I wrote this poem about Agatha Christie - it's a work in progress. What do you think so far?

Question

A colonel with a big moustache

A vicar's dotty wife

An actress somewhat past her prime

....A hidden, bloodied knife

The pealing of a country clock

The roses round the door

A cup of tea with seed cake

...A body on the floor

A plush hotel in London

A cabin on the Nile

The 4.15 from Paddington

...A cold and twisted smile

A portly man with patent hair

A spinster with her knitting

A fiendish plot soon figured out

...those wee grey cells permitting

Answer 1

More, more, must have more. You have a job on to keep the standard but judging by what has been done I know you can do it.

Answer 2

Well well, I clicked to read your poem thinking I would be responding with a sarcastic comment BUT I think it's very good indeed.  Look forward to hearing the rest.

Answer 3

Your question could have been 'Which writer comes to mind?' and it would have been obvious.  Well done, you have Agatha nailed.

Answer 4

WOW! That was really good. I love her books and I thought your poem was excellent.

Answer 5

I like it, you have talent girl!

Take no notice of the Muslim t**t, he's been getting up everyone's noses for a while now, and he's a tad thick. He lives in squallor with his hundreds of family members, and a pack of goats. What would HE know about poetry???

Answer 6

Brilliant. =)

Answer 7

please please! dont give up you's day job... your poem is S****y as you's english say.... hope this helps lady.