Hello x]
Im 13 and just wrote a poem for my best friend.
She hasn't seen it yet >.< And I want to know what you think of it.
Help me out?
I'm not very good at poems, so i'd like some advice.
Thanks :]
-name?-
T’was a girl with orange-red hair,
With a smile that reached the sky,
A child with a bright future,
Who never told a lie.
More then just a pretty face,
The girl was smart as ever,
Loyal, true, and very kind,
She could even pull off clever.
As she aged she learned and grew,
Her life had very few flaws,
It was a life worth living,
With little time to pause.
Time continued to speed on by,
When something went horribly wrong,
She had no time to dance or play,
Or even hum a song.
Moving across the United States,
Is easier said then done,
Of course she stayed optimistic,
Her smile could out-shine the sun.
The new life started easy,
But nothing was the same,
She lost her smile in a bet,
Like life was some sick game.
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