I wrote this poem the other day...Is it any good?

Question

By no means am I a poet, but I felt this piece was pretty decent. It's very heart felt, meaningful and metaphorical. I hope you enjoy it.

Broken Home

A broken window on what was once a majestic home

Now is nothing but an abandoned desolate abomination

The pieces of broken glass scattered about the grounds

I try to pick them up and piece them together

But to no avail

The tiny shards no longer fit inside the now empty frame

One can't help but stare at the weathered structure

And wonder how it looked whilst occupied

I wonder the same as I try to complete the glass puzzle

What would the former tenant say if she saw the horrendus shape

Knowing that where once stood a beautiful home

Has now been reduced to a pile of rubble

Would a tear be shed along with thoughts of how this happened

Would she help me fix the shattered window

Or would she walk away and make me fend for myself

One can only hope

That her hands would meet mine

That her eyes would meet mine

As together we fix the broken window

As together we repair this broken home

Answer 1

It is very touching and deep. Extemely well written.

Answer 2

I definitely did enjoy it. It really is very good!

Keep writing!