I wrote this poem. what do you think?

Question

one by one they fall

like black and white dominos

a chain reaction

a ripple in water through the pond of life

they fall

to make another stand

they stand

to make another fall

so now what?

do we continue?

as life gets rough

do we keep on going?

we have to

to keep hope

to keep sanity

to keep life

we have to push through

to get stronger

we have to do whats right.

"an eye for an eye leaves the world blind" -ghandi

Answer 1

o my gosh that was like the best poem i've read on yahoo i loved it!!!!!!!!! it totally rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

Excellent.

Answer 3

I think it's WONDERFUL!  

Nicely written, flows well, is a perfect reflection in the pool of life of the rippling effects of our actions.

And THE question of our times, as it has always been, what do we do now?  Life and choices.

Answer 4

I love the uplifting thoughts that your poem expresses.  The metaphor of the dominoes falling and standing up again over and over is outstanding.  I especially like the concept in the last three lines.  Thank you.

Answer 5

That's beautiful. Keep writing!