I wrote this poem!!!wud u plz check it out!?

Question

"PAIN ADDICT"

I’m afraid to take another step,

So I’m hiding my foot prints from the way ahead,

I’m having the same pain beneath my ribs again…

And your thoughts are still spinning in my head.

I’m feeling so faint, my voice is unclear,

Still shouting your name, hoping you’ll ever hear,

As time moves on, I’m just falling behind,

Trying to slow down my clock; but it’ll never stop the time.

Can’t continue living with your memories,

My heart is not bleeding; it won’t soak my mind,

Cause instead of blood, hatred is flowing through my vein,

I better cut my vein to get rid of the pain.

Running against the wind, rowing against the tide

Now I’m too tired to explain how many times I died,

Just to put a simple end to the tragedy

I’ve been addicted to pain, and I’ll always be.

Answer 1

This is really good, But it souds very emo. I love it, and may other will too. but you'll always have people with things to say, but you should listen. I love your work.

Answer 2

Wow, im stunned.

Recently something happened with me, and i've now read this poem and it totally reflects everything. I love how its so mysterious.

"Can't coninue living with your memories"

This is so beautiful, i have to say its the best poem i've read on here yet. You should be really really proud of yourself to be able to write a poem like that. Its astounding in my eyes.

It draws you in completely.

I love it

x

Answer 3

Wow, I love it!

I think you did a wonderful job=]

♥

Answer 4

very well written.. I could completly relate to it.. keep it up homie :D

Answer 5

It's pretty emo but good. Unlike the other poems I've read lately, this one actually makes me think.

Answer 6

Wow.....i like the poem so much...it seems that the writer has gone through a pain in real and thats y has been able to express such kind of feeling so nicely and properly!! i appreciate it!