I wrote this song and im eleven look on details?

Question

hi this song is called 'plastic Guitars' its about plastic punks. on the chorus it notes some famous punk. joe strummer jonny rotten lars frederiksen and iggy pop... here go's

They say they look so hip

with their black lipstick

They got the clothes they got the click

But they dont get it 'cos

They have Pl-pl-pl-pl-pl plastic guitars, plastic guitars

They dont listen to iggy, johnny, joe or lars

cos they got plastic guitars

Plastic Bass, Plastic Drums, plastic guitars,

at home, rolexes and rolls royce motorcars

they dont drink at a bar,

They smoke cigars,

cos... they have... they have pl-pl-pl-pl-pl plastic guitars

ohh pl-pl-pl-pl plastic guitars

no they dont listen to iggy johnny joe or lars,

nah they prefer posh motercars

dont forget the Ciiiiiiiigarsssss

Answer 1

Great!

Rhythmical, catchy, and I can hear a tune already!

Answer 2

Not bad, I didn't start writing song until I was 14 and my first efforts were not something I would have put on the internet....when I was 11 I had no idea who Iggy was or Strummer. Good one, keep it up

Answer 3

Yahoo guidelines clearly state you have to be 13 to use Yahoo answers site.

Answer 4

Yeah, I like it. Add more to it and you may have a hit! Got a band or singer?  

Answer 5

I like it. I like the concept of plastic guitars, it says what I believe about a lot of todays so called stars.  Very perceptive for an 11year old.  Brill, well done.

Answer 6

Not a bad efforts - but - you have to be 13 to answer or ask questions on this site!

Answer 7

Hope your "brother" dosn't mind when his account is suspended - Reported!!!!!

good songby the way

Answer 8

Thats alright for someone your age.