I wrote this spell, pleasee tell me what u think?? thanks so much!?

Question

witches one and witches all

i ask a favor from you

to be a human when dry

and a mermaid when wet

with a tail that shines a deep, deep blue

just a tail, a beautiful tail

Gills, i do not need

powers i shall not have

only water on my legs

will transform me

please, give this gift to me

pelase tell me what i may need to add,what else i may need, and what i shud take away!!

no rude comments pelase, its just so...well rude, i wud strongly appriciate it if u would all be nice!

Answer 1

i dont think it needs anything else its a cool spell like poem thingy!

Answer 2

did you just write it for fun or do you accually do witchcraft and spells? im not making fun of you cuz im into it 2. email me back plz! then we could help eachother later. but about the spell it sounds good but adding  "as my will so mote it be" at the end will help

Answer 3

its not enough and frankly it wont work. I'm sorry but your gonna need a whole ritual for that purpose. A RITUAL, and its not just witchcraft your gonna have to use for this kind of physical transformation, your gonna have to go through hermetic magic, and thats a long path. its very very hard to do something like this. witchcraft alone will not work, you'll have to mix it with hermetic magic to get the stunning effects you want. And it takes years for people to learn hermetic magic, its not like a wiccan spell that anyone can do. with hermetics you can't skip a level, you have to go through each one to get the results you want. I'm sorry i don't want to be rude but this spell wont get you anywhere near to physical transformation and even if you did start researching and studying on hermetics it wont get you anywhere because you'll need more time to master it. I'm sorry if this sounds rude but its the truth. you cant be a mermaid, its not that simple. this type of magic your going to need its higher than anything you've ever tried. the closest thing that could get you happy the simplest possible way would be to use a spell to make you have dreams at night that you were a mermaid, thats as far as simple ritual magic will get you. believe me I've been delving with these things longer than you have, your not gonna get near with just that, it takes a lot more, not just effort or study, but a lot more sacrifices than you can imagine. sorry if you dont understand, its just wanting to be a mermaid involves something higher, something more divine and universal. something im afraid no one can achieve in just a few words or  spells.

Answer 4

I think you are significantly lacking in understanding how magic works.  Magic CAN NOT defy the laws of physics, get used to it.  Magic must work within all natural laws, that is just the way it is.

Answer 5

As I told you before, the incantation is great except for one thing. Witches have NOTHING to do with transforming you into a mermaid. Witches didn't write the spell on 43things.com. Somebody thought it was a cute idea, but I can guarantee you it wasn't a witch. I am not a teenager, I am much older than you think. I've been a practicing witch for many years and I am telling you the truth when I say that witches cannot physically transform your human body into a mermaid. You can choose not to believe me, that's your prerogative, but it won't make what I am saying any less true. Those that claim to have a spell, or claim to have really PHYSICALLY become a mermaid are simply not being truthful.

Answer 6

I am not going to be rude but I am going to be frank. It won't work. Mermaids aren't real. If people knew how to become mermaids you would know about it.

Answer 7

U need to put gills in there in case some one is gonna take a picture of u and stay there for a long time until u come up from the water and I think thats a nice spell I might try it if u put gills in it.....

Answer 8

If you don't have gills how will you breath under water?  Your human way of breathing will be of no use to you under the sea.

Answer 9

Just a bit curious,....what if your outside,...

and it starts to really pour down rain,...

does that mean,...everyone will see you

turn into a mermaid,....or what if you really,..

work up a sweat,....based on spell you wrote,...

i don't think a wise witch would give you that spell,...

even if one really did exist,...;),......

Answer 10

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