I wrote your name?

Question

i wrote your name on the rock

but i forgot where i put it. do u think its a good poem sentence?if not give me another one but it have to start with i wrote your name on the rock but............

Answer 1

I think it should be on "a" rock rather than "the" rock.

anyway, here's some 3 roughly worded attempts.  :)

not fantastic, but it was fun writing it.

I wrote your name on a rock,

Doodling it without a thought,

Wishing you are here with me,

To watch the sunset at the quay.

I wrote your name on a rock,

But forgot where I put it,

My parents got a rude shock,

When they, by chance, found it.

I wrote your name on a rock,

And threw it out to sea,

Dulling the pain and aftershock,

Of your passing and leaving me

Answer 2

but... i wrote in invisible chalk! jk umm...

im not sure what kind of poem you are trying to make.. is it a love poem? a kids poem? or what??

Answer 3

i wrote your name on a rock but the powerful tides of the unforgiving storm erased it like i erased you from my life.