If You Wrote This Would It Sound Stupid ?

Question

Out Of All Them Stars

Your The Biggest Not In Size But In Heart

And The Brightest One Ive Ever Seen

Soo Rare To Find

You Just Want To Keep........

I Dno If Its Stupid Or Makes Sense Or Anything....Anyone Know Like How To Make It Better :S

xx

Answer 1

it makes sense

Answer 2

Of All The Stars up in the sky

You are the The Brightest One

And The Biggest In Heart that  I have Ever Seen

Soo Rare To Find

I Just Want To Keep that star close to my heart/in my pocket forever........

Answer 3

its greats!!!! just change them to the and u can definently tell u care about someone rite now and u should also make it into a song if u were using it as a poem but it sounds great as a poem or a song i dont kno y u thought it was stupid

Answer 4

It makes sense but if your trying to impress someone use something that  you think is right:]

Answer 5

aw, yeah, it makes sence.

its cute(: