If you can spare 5 mins I would love some honest criticism of two songs I wrote.?

Question

If you can spare 5 mins I would love some honest criticism of two songs I recently wrote and recorded myself?

www.myspace.com/compasscharlatan

Who do I sound like?

How are the lyrics/vocals/melody/etc?

Note- I recorded these in my basement on very bad equipment so please don't talk about the production as I know it is not up to par. I really just want to know if these songs are any good...

thank u so much

Answer 1

War:  Its 'okay'.  I agree, work a little on your voice.  Go for training or something.  But the lyrics are good.

Fallen Saints: I like this one more.  Good guiter work.  

Good luck and keep writing, try to spice up your next songs a little more...

Answer 2

i really really like your guitar work

but the voice i aint so crazy about

Answer 3

meeh. nothing great..