If you like to read poetry and give feedback...?

Question

I wrote a poem I'd like you to read. It's too long to put on here, so just click this link and it'll be right there. It's called "Green-Eyed Girl" for lack of a better title at the time being.

http://jessi675.blogspot.com/

Answer 1

This Is Beautiful, I Love It

please awnser mines

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Answer 2

Jessi you have a true talent. that piece is excellent. as for what people think of teens that write ... hey I started when I was also A teen. I now have works that are published and also songs. keep it up my dear. never stop. let your writing become your outlet.

  some of the best poets and music writers expressed themselves in their work.

Answer 3

This is a sad poem, but he did come even if it was late, so why didn't she accept him then?

I like it, but you need to work on the rythym.  It doesn't flow well in some places.

Still, it is good.