Im 14 and i want to be a writer when i get out of highschool, do you like this poem? ?

Question

Day turns to night

I become out of sight.

Slowly creeping past the bedroom hall

Thinking how I will end it all.

i stop and look from right to left

looking for someone that watched my every step

This time its clear

My fear is at a all time high

I press my back up against the wall

And i slide down to the cold floor

Then i cry.

Every cut is a new scar

Every scar is a story

Every story ends up in a tear

And every tear is produced by fear

I sit and stare at a blank wall

Holding my phone

Wishing you would call

All my memories are bad

All because you always made me sad

What did i do to make you hate me

Your words are cold

They slowly break me

I'm falling down

I'm falling fast

Maybe if i die

You'll be happy at last.

Answer 1

yep

Answer 2

   Im very impressed. it was written exceptionally and it was easy to understand.

    as soon as night falls a troubled girl is planning out her suicide and making sure no one can see. cutting herself. secretly she hopes that the person who made her sad will call so she has an excuse to not go through with it.



    but she decides that since he hates her so much shes better off dead. its beautiful.