Im 17 and I wrote a poem to my girlfriend she has helped me alot and I would like to give her this.?

Question

Pauline I miss you,

My Love....My Life..... My beautiful future wife,

you mean everything to me, without you I cannot be,

you refill my heart, day and night, countless hours of endless light,

Your eyes reach deep into my soul, no more lost eternal dark hole,

Your skin so smooth, your voice, built to soothe,

Without you Im weak, my life would be so bleak,

Thank you for giving me hope..., goodbye dirty old rope.

(Im not emo its just a poem, please dont be harsh to me its my first poem I try. =) thank you.)

Answer 1

i like everything there but the dirty rope part :/ what is that hehehe i would fix that before giving her that. but as far as i know girls think poems are sweet so go make her heart melt

Answer 2

wow, that is an awesome poem you got there. you should really give this poem to your girlfriend

Answer 3

Um, i don't understand the rope bit. it sounds like you're addressing that to her?