Im a Rapper tryin to get signed. Just listen to my video nd spread the word. Im from Hamilton, Ontario?

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b-Sbuskx4Lk heres the link for the vid igh im kinda young but still im trying to get noticed u dont even know how long ive been rapping nd enough people been tellin me im good nd im trying to get places me nd my click so just try nd help me out, im not looking for sympathy im just looking for a little attention for my music igh

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Look bro, I'm gonna tell you straight and I don't want to hurt your feelings but I'm an actor in L.A. I didn't like the music you put fourth. I feel that your just talkin about the same old garbage that everybody else is talking about. Lets look at M&M, Tu pac, Wu Tang (especially),ect. They talked about there lives and how things were. And Wu Tang brought that uniqueness that nobody else could match. They rapped about what they felt and what they "needed" to say. Just like actors. Forget everything and anybody else. Don't try and sound cool, just really say what is really going on. Not the dollars you say you have but whats going on with you. The story. Understand? Keep practicing and speak through your soul. You are the stage and people are waiting. If you give people your true feelings and soul, people will listen and sooner or later will respect and have love for you. I wish you the best man, seriously. You and I are no different. Be you.       P.S write your stuff down and figure out if its good material or not.