Im writing a song can anyone lend a hand in it please..?

Question

Basically im just stuck on the chorus to it, its a Blink 182, Sum 41 style of music.

She left me

I dont know why

It was to late

To say goodbye

She broke my heart

For the last time

You think im crawling back

Your out your f***ing mind

You think were still friends

But how wrong you are

You messed up my life

Now you've gone to far

Chorus

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HELP!

Answer 1

I'll take a step back

while  you walk away

I'll take a step back

there's nothin to say

You said it all

when you left that day

Its sink or swim

the world your livin in

Never again

Never love again

Answer 2

I think you need to work on the song as a whole. It sounds really generic. If your going for a "F-you ex-girlfriend song" make it stick out and don't hold back.

I think Alkaline Trio has some of the best kind of these songs with song like Stupid Kid "All the things that used to make me smile. One of them was you for just a little while. Why is it you had to say, good-bye in your special way, and slash the tires on my ca-ar..."

Also Channel 43 has a great song you should give a listen to called My Qal Gal. That is some brutal stuff, "Go ahead and ravel in your heartless little life. Find Mr. Flash Stability Become A Mistreated Wife. I hope you look back and realize what you had. I hope it's freezing cold out on your death bed."

But here, listen for yourself...

http://www.garageband.com/song?%7Cpe1%7C...

Answer 3

It can never be water under the bridge with you

stay the h**l out of my life -

If you know whats good for you

It can never be water under the bridge with you

In my mind, you never existed

F**k you for making me hate you

Answer 4

ive been thinkin and sinkin with all lies

no more crys

its time for your f***in *** to fry