Important to me.What does this poem mean to you? What do you think of it?Please comment and interpret.?

Question

I wrote this in 5 minutes.

It's called..

' What ?'

Is it strange to want to fill a cavity?

Afterall, the decay is not only our own work.

s*x, drugs and rock n roll.

Does it ring a bell?

A right to a high after all the blows.

What is a weakness?

Fear through and through.

What is a strength?

The strongest pain within...

... Hidden and unhidden.

What is love without hate and hate without love?

A disturbed cycle of nature, disturbed.

What is a life without meaning?

When you cease to create.

What is a way to die?

That is a way to die.

Sarah J

Answer 1

I like what you are attempting but each is lacking for more development.  You have attempted too much.  Maybe rework to 3 or 4 separate looks, (poems).  Your first stanza is a strong opening.  "Is it strange to want to fill a cavity, afterall the decay was your handiwork."  A good start, now do what most do: edit, edit, and rewrite.  The process really helps to clarify the message.

Answer 2

Ummm I think the “drugs” part is referring to “that is a way to die”……maybe strength means you don’t do drugs but everyone is like just do it.(why do people always say dude when they are high anyways lol)

**never got high but know people who do**