Improved deck for yu-gi-oh?

Question

MONSTERS:

1. Slate Warrior

2. Twinheaded Beast

3. Element Hero Sparksman

4. Skilled Dark Magician (2)

6. Mirage Dragon

7. Summoned Skull

8. Luster Dragon (3)

11. Black Luster Soldier

12. Buster Blader

13. Gemini Elf

14. Dark Blade

15. Pitch Black Warwolf

16. Zombyra The Dark

17. Opticlops

18. Obnoxious Celtic Guard

19. Gearfried the Iron Knight

20. Mobius the Frost Monarch

21. Gigantes

22. Guardian Sphynx

Spell

24. Heavy Storm

25. (2) Lightning Vortex

27. Monster Reborn

28. Mystical Space Typhoon

29. Swords of Revealing Light

30. Hammer Shot

31. Brain Control

32. Black Luster Ritual

33. Premature Bariual

Trap:

34. Magic Cylinder(2)

35. Rope of Life

36. Torrential Tribute

37. Bottomless Traphole

38. Shadow Spell

40. Sakuretsu Armor (2)

Answer 1

wateva

Answer 2

Magic Cylinder = LIMITED to 1

Answer 3

no elemental hero

could add mirror force

take out black luster  soldier and the ritual

add blue eyes white dragon

burst stream of destruction

lord of d and flute

add monster reborn

add skill white magician and embluend of dragon destroyer  (for buster blader)

Answer 4

The only thing I have to say is that you need polymerization. It will help you make a better deck.

Answer 5

Deck Grade: 3/10

Needs WAY MORE improvement. Check out www.yugioh.tcgplayer.com for some ideas and for Deck Strategy.