In response to a comment, I wrote this little ditty....any comments?

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By Jonni F.

How would I dance

with a glass of P.G.?

That's Pinot Grigio,

for you and me.

I'd twinkle around,

and be light on my feet.

I wouldn't care,

to take a seat.

Chardonnay would make me jive,

it really makes me come alive!

Malbec, Merlot, Cab and Zin,

across the room,

I'd take a spin!

Riesling and Petit Syrah,

I'm jitterbugging,

say "hurrah"!

Bordeaux and finally French Champagne,

It's Happy Dancing time again.

Answer 1

I keep hoping that your chipper mood will rub off on me ...

I would love to be doing the jitter bug instead of the stress walk I m doing today.

Why don't you pass me a glass of that Merlot and see if I can pull out of this little puddle I created... LOL!

Answer 2

This is light-hearted, musical and poetic. It engages the reader. It is a very good example of how practice makes perfect (well, almost perfect).

Answer 3

Now I'll know what to serve at my next party!!

Well done and very Happy, indeed!

Answer 4

I'll raise my glass in a salute to that poem.Happy, delightful, fun.No more "whining" for awhile for me.I'll drink to that.Cheers.

Answer 5

Wine dancing through the night

with Jonni, her feet so light

no need to see morn's light

she's in bed... sleeping tight!

Nice wines.  You should make a series on these and the cast of characters that sample.  I have seen many 'characters' when I have attended wine tastings. Myself, I am just an observer! lol  Now where did I put that case!

Answer 6

No, no . . . no, I really should be going.

I gotta get up early and get on Answers.

Ahhh! What the h**l, pour me another--lets cut a rug.

Answer 7

What a fun and joyful poem with a great sound.  You did a wonderful job with your rhyme and meter and you did a fabulous job of entertaining us as well.  I'll have a glass and dance right along with you.  Very nice.