In your opinion, What do you think of my poem

Question

Life couldn't be better

Everything has fallin into place

I'm finally on my own

Its great but a bit scary

With bills to pay

And a job to maintain

I couldn't be happier

To be completely independent

With such great friends

And a supportive family

I have finally realized

That life is worth living

And even though

It may be hard at first

I will become a stronger person

And learn who I truly am

Answer 1

Very good - I would keep it and read it in 10 years!  

Good luck to you!

Answer 2

I liked it. Reminds me of when I was 18.

Answer 3

thats really good! its very true good job

Answer 4

i think it's fine... looks like your enjoying the taste of being out of school and work, huh? yeah, felt the same way after college and receiving my first pay check... =)

Answer 5

i think its really good keep doing what your doing by the looks of your writing your going places  

Answer 6

i love it its soo goood