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Indigo Black- "Deep" Tell Me What You Think Of My Poem?

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Why do we complain

When our lives are lavish

& remains glamoured with fame

But in africa life isn't the same

Why do other men

Often call other men g*y

When in reality that's what they are

At the end of the day

Why do we 2 Church

But we kill & fight

And act obnocious

We never put god first

Why do we quinch are thirst

With the spell of the devil's blood

Evilness overcomes our love

Why do we call women b*****s

But when your mother is around

You give hugs & kisses

Why do we smoke weed

When it never helps us 2 Succeed

Indeed,

The darkness it precieves

Why do we use money

But we know sometimes

It makes the world do funny

& Crazy things

Why do the birds sing

So we can hear some piece

Somethin we need 2 keep in mind

Why some rappers

Waste their time

Writin Rhymes

About money, drugs, clothes & s*x

But i bet

On the other side of life

It will be more strife

Than rollin dice

We often stand

& Let life past

Make it last

Somethin it's worth

No need to curse

or brust your bubble

But if you don't believe this story

It can be deep 2 otherz

By: Indigo Black

basically i wrote this because i felt annoyed about so many i seen on the internet or in reality that i seen in my own eyes. but what are you comments.

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  1. that's really good, and is completely true.


  2. that's poetic man, insightful

    write one?

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

  3. it was good because it touches people in more than just one category. ex; a poem about racism generally touches one group of people. your poem is about more than just one group of people. (g**s, woman, ect.)so its more relatable. i liked it

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