Plot: 13 yr old Boy and Girl are refugees in a camp after their country was attacked and taken over by invader Empire. They are waiting to be sent to a safer country when the Empire surprise attacks the refugee camp. They are hiding in a tent when a Empire soldier comes in. He is looking at the girl perversely and he grabs her and drags her away. Boy tries to fight Soldier but the girl tells him to stop because she doesn't want him to get hurt. She gives him her necklace and tells him not to forget her. The Boy still tries to save her and the Soldier knocks him out with a rifle.
7 years pass
The Boy is now 20 and he was saved by another country, Kingdom (good guys). He has been trained in the army and is a top fighter and commander. They have been planning war against Empire since it has been creeping towards there borders. One day he catches a spy in Kingdom and he chases after them. He catches them and is about to kill them but he wants to see there face so he takes off their mask. He realizes it’s Girl.
So basically to wrap this up they are fighters on opposite sides and a war is starting. It’s going to go back and forth between their P.o.V.s . Girl’s plot is that she is a spy for the Empire and she exploits her relationship w/ Boy to get info for her country. She lies and says she escapes to Kingdom but at night she reports to the army leader who she’s engaged too. Boy and Girl eventually fall in love w/ each other which conflicts her mission. She doesn’t want to betray him but she’s already gone to far in with the mission. Boy founds out she’s a spy later on and is now conflicted because he loves her but knows when the war starts that she will be killed because she isn’t a civilian.
So the story revolves around their conflict, the war, and their love.
What do you think? How could I make it better? I’m not writing it now I’m going to save it for later use but I want it to be good when I eventually get to writing it.
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