Is This Good Poem?

Question

With might and with power The army of Brothers need one another to stand

by there side

For they can’t stand alone and through the battle

They will never give up and they will try there hardest to when the war

because they know that something is on there side that can change thing

and that can make a different in the world.

Answer 1

It doesn't sound much like a poem...add more metaphors and rhythm...that would enhance it.

Answer 2

Sorry but thats not a poem thats just a bunch of words