Is This Poem Good? Poem Competition?

Question

I'm entering a poem competition, where you can win up to $100,000! I wrote this poem, and I wanna know if it's good or bad. Please rate,on a scale of 1 to 10, and if you think there's room for improvement, just say what I should change, and say what you think I should change it to. Thanks!

A Hidden Celebrity

Celebrities may bring

Back memories,

But I know that

My dream's about to show,

And my name will glow

Someday in Hollywood.

Maybe I could

be who I wanna be,

and show the world the real me.

The celebrity inside of me,

May show what the eye can see.

Somethings can get personal,

Others are emotional.

So many things pop into my head,

Most of them being unsaid.

My conscience knows what's best,

As I go through life with zest.

So many things recovered,

But more to be discovered.

Being normal may seem easy,

But being on stage makes you...

Queezy.

Answer 1

9or10. i loved it.please answer mine.

Answer 2

Since you have not told me what the split would be if I helped you to write the winning poem, I can only make the most general of suggestions: I would select a topic of more substance than striving for celebrity.  From what I understand, it's not all it's cracked up to be.