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Is This Poem Good?Please Tell Me?

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Three people like my poem but i need more people to say if they like it or if they dont like it. Here it is.

The Perfect Day

My life is like a plum, but only a soft one. Making a cake, there is no wait. Love from a heart, that got torn apart. Only the perfect girl will fill your brain full of faith. So the snowflakes will fall down on your way to the greatest day of your life today.

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  1. well, to be honest, its a bit cheesy and kind of monotonous

    sry if that was harsh

    but if ure under 13, ure pretty talented


  2. That's beautiful  love it is so proffesional
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