Question:

Is This a Triple Trigee? (spell checker says triage)?

by Guest64183  |  earlier

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This White sand -------------------Between my toes

Waves wash over ---------------- As I Sit thinking

Salt spray on my lips ---------- I slowly l**k it off

Sunlight bathes my skin-----------As Seagulls fly over

Shadow falls over me -------------- I look up

Offer me your hand --------------- I slowly grasp it

Pulling me up -----------------------I stand smiling

Children race by ------------------- In noisy play

We continue slowly -------------- Hand in hand

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  1. If I was literate and good at math (3X3)

    I'd say it was a enneatrigee ....

    or if I was being fancy and found some

    latin hanging around the place ...

    I'd say it was a nonatrigee ....hmmm that one

    sounds like it would be pronounced better if

    I could pronounce a 6 syllable words.


  2. Yes.

  3. I think the 1st and 3rd lines of the first stanza (2nd column)don't get along. Other than that its good, but try to make your next Trigee good(er).

    P.S. I don't know about triple Trigee, but if there is any then it should be 3 columns, as it was posted once before.

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