Is everything right in this sentence?

Question

Is all of the grammar and punctuation correct in this sentence?

In two similar trials, one fictional, and one horribly true; black peoples were tried, and unfairly sentenced.

Answer 1

In two similar trials, one fictional and one horribly true, black people were tried and unfairly sentenced.

I'm not very sure about this, so your version could be completely correct.

Answer 2

i believe so. unless tried is supposed to be tired....then idk...

Answer 3

You used "peoples" instead of "people". I also have doubts about the word "tried". Do you mean "tired"? If you don't, then everything else in the sentence is correct.

Answer 4

no, everything isn't right in ur sentence, because u said black peoples instead of black people. leave out the s in people because u're talking about more than 1 person