I'm playing with form and "the" is completely unnecessary, but I'm having trouble making it work.
Wanna help?
There was a place we used to go,
Grandma's cottage, in days of old
the floors were scrubbed, in Spring with love,
the polishing and dusting done
As little children we'd arrive
With dog and parents as our guides
The beds are made, now go to sleep
On lovely, scented lake front breeze
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I'm in an emotional place now, but TRYING to write and learn, any suggestions are welcome. I'm going to continue with this, Robert H. inspired me on the story-telling angle. THANKS EVERYONE!
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